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Ivy's Smut Writing TipsIvy's Smut Tip's
In this piece of writing I will be explaining to all you lovely lot how I write my band slash sexy scenes. I know what your thinking 'Ewww Ivy but some of your smut is really detailed and I could never do that," Well the secret my dears is practice, once you overcome that wall of saying no I can't put this and that in my writing, people would think I'm sex craved! Once that's over you'll be surprised that you could write them banging each other with baseball bats...not recommended.
So let's start this shit then!
1.Setting the scene
In smut you obviously need a place or area where your two characters can romp to their hearts content. It's no fun if you just place them in a bed is it? That just takes all the imagination away just throwing them in a bed and saying 'Get to it' No my dears we do not do this.
To get you started I'm going to share my favourite little places to put my characters in;
-Tents, Underneath the moonlight with the stars shining in each others eyes as
Andley- Teachers PetAshley's P.O.V
"Okay, who can tell me the value of X?" My class stared back at me like I'd just asked them to dance like monkeys, I sighed this was going to be a long day. Rubbing the equation off the blackboard my eyes wandered to the two empty seats at the back of the class, Christian's and Andy's. I didn't know why those two gave me so much hassle, always showing up late for my classes, messing around in class you name it they do it, well Christian's not really the problem it's mostly Andy who got on my last nerves.
I heard the classroom door creak open and giggles pour through it, Andy and Christian were pushed into my class by Mr Ronnie Radke, the principle.
"Andy, Christian what is the meaning of this?" I asked, folding my arms and glaring at them.
"Truancy is not acceptable in this school boys," scolded Ronnie, they hung their heads but I could tell it was just an act they had done it with me so many times before.
"Sorry Sir," they chorused.
"Yes, But it's not me you should be a
Kiss The Lips Of Evil Ch. 34 - Ashley
It was a cold December morning. I hadn't seen my baby in three days and I was starting to get lonely. I was sitting in my hotel room with Jake, Jinxx, Tokyo and Killer. My Mom and Dad were downstairs making sure that everything for the wedding was ready.
"Are you OK Ash?" Jake said tapping me on the shoulder.
"Of course I'm OK, why would I not be?" I asked.
"You've been pacing back and forth and you chewed your thumb nail down to the nub." Jinxx laughed.
"I'm just really nervous. What if he doesn't show up?" I was going crazy. I had this dream a couple times where Andy doesn't show up because he actually didn't love me.
"It'll be OK. He'll show up. Come on, you gotta get ready. Shower, wash your hair, clear your head, but more importantly, calm down." Jake smiled handing me my suit and a towel and pushing me into the bathroom. "Take your time. I'm gonna go walk the dogs, Jinxx is gonna watch you." He closed the door.
I stripped off all of my clothes and stepped into the spray of the ho
Feelings 2Ashley stared at the figure he saw before him.
It was a man, an Eighteen year old actually. He had long tangled black hair that reached to his shoulders, he was skinny, and had creamy white skin that almost glowed. His eyes were a stunning blue, but what was most unique about him was that he had long elegant, black feathery wings that were as tall as him, he was holding a old book, flipping through the tattered pages. The liquid eyeliner that he was wearing, was running. His red lipstick was smeared. All that he wore was a white bloody towel around his slim waist.
Ashley froze in absolute terror as the winged boy felt Ashley's presence, and looked at him, his stunning blue eyes pierced through Ashley, studying him intently. It almost seemed like those blue eyes were searching his soul. He felt extremely vulnerable as he felt the temperature of the room dropped. Ashley shivered slightly as the icy cold wrapped around him like a blanket. He stared directly into thos
Kiss The Lips Of Evil Ch. 31 - Andy
It felt so good to have Ash holding me now. I had him back, and I know now that I won't let anything happen to our relationship again. We were sitting on the couch in the very front talking with the guys about what happened. Jinxx was at the brink of tears, Jake had his fist clenched so tight from anger that I was afraid his nails would dig in and break the skin and CC, well he was in complete shock and disbelief.
"I'm gonna kill him." Jake muttered cracking his knuckles.
"No Jake. We can't kill him. We just have to plan out our revenge at tonights show." Jinxx laughed. I was feeling uncomfortable with every passing minute. When Jinxx wanted to get revenge on people, they usually end up going too far. "I vote we kidnap him and leave him tied up in our bathroom, torturing him slowly with every passing day."
"Too much." CC said "We could cut off all of his hair and tattoo 'dickhead' across his forehead."
"Not enough." Jake smiled, cracking his knuckles again. "We can push him off a cliff
God Bless You-AndleyAshley was pissed. The thing that made it even worse is that he was pissed at me.
So what? I mean there isn't any harm in talking to my ex girlfriend is there? Well he seems to think there is. He says you don't do that. It could be basically cheating.
Yeah, did I forget to mention Ash and I are kind of dating? We are, and I don't know what to do. He's never been pissed at me.
We'd gotten into an argument over two hours ago, and he hasn't said a word since. How childish is that? Of course I didn't help the matter by blowing him a raspberry...
I walked back to the bunks. I peeked in Ashley's and he was out cold. I crawled in beside him. I snuggled up to his chest, and soon fell asleep myself.
I dreamed about Ashley. Every time I sleep he always finds a way into my dreams. Sometimes I wish he wouldn't. This is one of those times. All he did was yell at me. I couldn't make out what he was saying.
I woke up with a start, and Ash was propped up on his elbow.
"Hey." He whispered.
Kiss The Lips Of Evil Ch. 35 - Andy
"How about Dennis if it's a boy." I smiled pushing the cart down the isle. Ash and I have been married for seven years and a little over nine months ago we decided to have a baby. He was visiting his Mom and Dad for a while.
"Great. And Ashlynn if it's a girl." He laughed into the phone. "I miss you."
"I miss you too. Come home soon though, I've got good news for you." I was bubbling over. I wanted to tell him the news, but I had to wait until I saw the expression on his face.
"I'll be back tomorrow night. Wait up for me?"
"Love you baby."
"Love you too Ashley. Bye." I hung up the phone and went down the isle for toys. I couldn't wait until Ash was home.
"Baby, I'm home." I heard him call from the front door. I ran down the stairs and jumped into his arms. "I missed you so much." He smiled. We moved into a house in a small suburb a few years ago when we started talking about babies.
"I know. Come upstairs to the babies room. I want to show you something." I kissed him and pul
It Feels Like I'm Falling In Love Alone 7
Chapter 7: Jealousy's An Ugly Word
The sun was bright, it was Monday morning of our last week of school ever, and I had just awoken to snuggling up to my straight best friend that I apparently have an obvious crush on. My mind couldn't comprehend much thought until my Mom came n the room.
"Morning boys!" she yelled. I covered my head with my hands and let out a groan. She's too loud for six in the morning. "Andy, wake Ashley up before you're both late for school." she turned around and went back downstairs, probably to finish cooking breakfast.
"Yes ma'am." I grumbled kicking Ash in the butt. "Get up."
"Shit that hurt." he complained and rolled over to face me. "What?"
"We have school today." I yawned.
"Not going." he covered his face.
"We have finals."
"We still have to go." I shook him again. He grabbed on to me and pulled me back into the bed, wrapping his arms around me and burying his face in my hair.
"Lets just stay here and sleep a while. Plus I'm cold and you're r
It Feels Like I'm Falling In Love Alone 8
Chapter 8: Show Me A Bleeding Heart Still Pounds
It's been years since that day. It still burns, the memories of it. I still dream about it too. That poor, sad little Andy who shuns any thoughts of loving another person just because the one guy he liked thought of him as a no body.
I've moved out of my parents house, and now live in somewhat of a penthouse with my fellow band members. Jake decided to break up with Evan after we graduated and is now dating CC. They both share a room on the other side of the suit. Ash lives in the room across the hall from mine. I never set foot in there, hell, when we're home I barely leave my room.
I could hear him now, flirting on the phone with some random girl. I didn't know who she was, nor did I want to know. She'd show up, they'd have sex in his room, then she'd leave. It tears me apart every time, and Ash knows how uncomfortable I am with all of it, but he doesn't care.
I honestly have no where to go. I can't move into the room across from CC an
It Feels Like I'm Falling In Love Alone 9
Chapter 9: It's OK If You Hate Me
"Andy! Andy, it's Jake, open up!" Jake was pounding at my door. I wasn't asleep, I was actually just laying in my bed, like I usually do, watching some cartoon on TV. I think it's called Tuff Puppy or some shit. I got up and unlocked the door, letting Jake in.
"What do you want?" I asked laying back down. Jake closed the door behind him and laid next to me in my bed, trying not to lay on Bruce's tail.
"Andy, Ash told me what happened." He sighed. "And now he's going bat shit crazy."
"I knew he would. I knew that if I told him he would hate me." I sighed running a hand through my hair.
"He doesn't hate you, he's just extremely confused. You should go talk to him." Jake was more preoccupied playing with Bruce than talking to me.
"Jake, I don't want to talk to him. It'll only make things worse." I pulled my covers over my head, only to have Jake yank them back down.
"Andy, not talking to him isn't making anything better. You should really consi
It Feels Like I'm Falling In Love Alone 13
Chapter 13: I Led The Revolution In My Bedroom And I Set All The Zippers Free
This burning need, was the same as the first time I saw him naked. When I wanted to go into that bathroom and just jump him, but he wasn't mine to have. Now that he is mine, I was terrified, but now, I'm not. I think it's Ash. He's always had a way about him that made me feel safe.
The heated make out session was working great. Ash had started grinding his hips against mine, trying to make some type of friction between us. The sound of his quiet moaning was getting to me. He pulled my shirt over my head and started placing tender kisses on my neck while he slid his fingers in my boxers and started rubbing idle circles.
"As good as that feels, I don't have a vagina." I giggled looking down at him.
"Don't feel sorry. I said it felt good." In almost no time we had gone back to kissing, soft moaning and rubbing against each other, the feeling was unbelievably good since the only thing keeping Ash
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